Monday, December 19, 2005
10:12 PM
Your eyes contain the Pacific Ocean
Peril awaits those who venture
An unfathomable depth among the shimmering waves
Your voice is the Genesis
A universe is borne by your song
The stars but a mere shade of your divine melody
I weep in great desire to drown in your eyes
Like filthy algae which cannot bear to see the glorious Sun
So I drown in my own tears
I moan in great agony
Like a mutated Orc in the presence of an unblemished Elf
So I am ashamed to hear my own voice
If I was a god of light and beauty
Had I been Balder the Beautiful
I might have dreamed to win your notice by my looks
If I had the voice of Chorus Angels
Could I mesmerize with a tune like the Sirens
I might endeavour to serenade you for your affection
Alas
You would never understand
An incredible pining to adore has been inflicted on me
Like death it inflicts all
Though I seek your blessed attention for comfort
In you I will never find the cure
Neither your concerned gaze nor your consoling voice
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it's the title lah... here, i changed it. it doesn't sound so bad now does it?
# posted by 
: 8:47 PM
: 8:47 PM
the original title was 'to angela zhang', so i changed it to something else. but after some reflection, i think i should change it back to the first title, in case people take my poem too seriously... heheh
# posted by : 1:58 PM
: 1:58 PM
I re-read it... over... And I suppose the hidden meaning has something to do with unrequited affection? Pining? Pain? Someone on a pedestal? Romeo and Rosalind?
Aye?
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Aye?
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